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With
relevance to the Legal Transcript Text and relevant ideas from language,
explore how language is used to assert power.
Because the text is set in a
courtroom we can predict that during the conversation the Bar has more power
over the witness (Mr Neil) this could be due to the Bar’s instrumental power.
In this text the Bar also has Political power over the witness and because of
this he has the ability to ask questions and be answered, immediately giving
him more power, however the judge in this scenario would have the most power
and although we do no hear from him we can assume that he is there and has the
highest form of instrumental power.
One clear example of the Bar
being the more dominant speaker is when he is asking for clarification and states:
‘’ is that because the police have been to see you so many times Mr
Neil‘’. The use of the
intensifier ‘’so’’ to modify ‘’many’’ shows that Mr Neil has been trouble with
the police before, by doing this the Bar could be achieving his primary purpose
of trying to convince the judge that Mr Neil is guilty of the crime he is
convicted for. ‘’so many times’’ can
also be seen as ironic and therefore it might show that the Bar is mocking Mr
Neil. The use of bald on record strategy and flouting Grice’s Maxim of manner,
to assert his power as well as lowering Mr Neil’s own status could be seen as
unprofessional. However ‘’so many time’’ is also a common idiom and in this
case the Bar might just be using to get his point across. The emphasis on the
idiom and Mr Neil’s name makes the implicature seem mocking. By starting the interrogative with ‘’is that
because’’ the Bar has made it harder for Mr Neil to answer the question, the
conjunction ‘’because’’ means that Mr Neil can only answer ‘’yes’’ or ‘’no’’ to
the question. This means that the Bar isn’t giving Mr Neil much chance to
defend himself, this makes the Bar more powerful and it is helping him achieve
his primary purpose.
Earlier in the text before the
Bar could finish his interrogative, Mr Neil interrupts with a response: ‘’ I
don’t think they did no.’’ The overlap could be seen as competitive however
because we know that Mr Neil is trying to defend himself we could assume that
he is eager in trying to prove his innocence and so interrupts the Bar. Mr Neil
could have also thought that the Bar has finished his question; ‘’you can’t
remember whether they came to see you’’ could’ve been the end of the question
whether ‘’or no’’ was added the intonation would have been the same. Based on
this we can assume that Mr Neil was not trying to take power away from the Bar
and from this we can say that the overlap might actually be in fact
cooperative. The dynamic verb ''think'' shows that Mr Neil is unsure and is trying not to impilicate himself by making such a bold declarative, this makes it less powerful and in doing so Mr Neil is also lessening his power. The determiner ‘’no’’ emphasizes the main subject of his declarative, which is that to the best of his knowledge the police hasn't been to see him.
Good use of concepts to give overview. Refer to him as 'the barrister' or as 'Bar' but not 'the Bar'. It would be useful to discuss the fact that the power resides with the judge rather than the barrister in terms of making Mr Neill answer - it is a convention of the court and part of the barrister's personal power certainly that he ask the questions and expect them to be answered but the authority (instrumental power) resides with the judge to ensure that this happens - the barrister himself cannot punish Mr Neil for not answering.
ReplyDeleteThere's a misunderstanding here that I have seen often: Mr Neil is not on triall and so will not be convicted if he seems guilty; Mr Peterson (whom the barrister is representing) is on trial so it is in his client's interests for the barrister to make Mr Neill seem like an unreliable witness at the very least and possibly the person at fault in the crime so that his client will 'get off'.
Check the maxim of manner (it is not manners) as what Bar says is clear, it is just bald, on-record and possibly patronising and provocative. Mention that it is a closed quenstion that applies constraints to get more terms/concepts in.
I am only marking the overview and one paragraph but I invite comments on the whole text from anyone reading.