Friday, 10 October 2014

Commentary on 'Gods Among #5' Article

The ‘Gods Among Us’ article I have written is mainly targeted at the readers of Empire magazine, with the main purpose to persuade the readers that Jennifer Lawrence is a ‘god among us.’ This is because many people who read the magazine will be aware of who Jennifer Lawrence, or maybe will recognize her from a movie. However they might not agree with my point of view, which is why I have used literary and language techniques such as simile’s and metaphors to convince them. Due to the fact that the article can be accessed online another purpose of the article is to entertain people who already like Jennifer Lawrence and just like reading articles about her.

One way I have tried to persuade the reader is by creating a list of the movies that Jennifer Lawrence has starred in; ‘X-Men… The Silver Linings Playbook… Winter Bone.’ The list has several purposes; one of them is to show the readers that Jennifer Lawrence can play a variety of roles and because of this people will be able to see that she is in fact talented. The list also connotes that Jennifer Lawrence is very hard working and dedicated to her job; this will make her seem more likable to the readers and helps me convince them of her talent. Another purpose of the list is to create a connection between the reader and Jennifer Lawrence; most people who read Empire will be into films and will most likely have watched a film that Jennifer Lawrence has starred in. However they might not have realised who she was, and so by providing a list of the most popular movies she’s been in they’ll recognise who she is. This then creates a connection between the person and Jennifer Lawrence, creating more interest for the reader which forces them to read more of the article.
Using the interest created from the opening paragraphs I then use metaphors to try and convince them of my point of view. The style model I based this article on also used metaphors; ‘this is a cat so cool’ is just one example. I therefore used this technique in my writing an example of this is when  I state that Jennifer Lawrence is ‘the sun, a dazzling ball of talent.’ This metaphor suggests that Hollywood needs Jennifer Lawrence just as much as we need the sun, it can also work as a pun. This is because the sun is a huge star in our galaxy, and in terms of film and the media Jennifer Lawrence is a huge star. This creates a light hearted humour in the article, making the reader feel relaxed making it easier for me as the writer to persuade them. I then extended the metaphor by describing Jennifer Lawrence as a ‘dazzling ball of talent.’ I have used the adjective ‘dazzling’ to carry on theme of Jennifer Lawrence of being a star; it also suggests that Jennifer Lawrence is extremely beautiful. In addition to this the adjective can be placed in the lexical field of stars, which further emphasizes my point on just how brilliant Jennifer Lawrence is. Other words that belong in the lexical field of stars that I have used throughout this article are; ‘shine’ and ‘brighter.’ The style model that I used also used lexical fields to get their point across; however instead of using the lexical field of gods I used the lexical field of stars.


 Another technique that Simon Braund uses in his ‘God’s Among Us’ article is contrasting Paul Newman to other celebrities, and so I also used this technique in my writing. For my article I contrasted Jennifer Lawrence to Jennifer Aniston, this is because Jennifer Aniston is a very well known superstar and a celebrity that I feel all my target audience will know. One way I have contrasted them us by comparing how many awards Jennifer Lawrence has won in comparison with Jennifer Aniston; Lawrence… won 99… whilst Aniston has only won 28.’ This shows that although Aniston has been in the industry twice as long as Lawrence, she hasn’t won as many awards and maybe therefore isn’t as talented as Lawrence is. By using factual information to compare the two actresses I have solidified my opinion that Lawrence is a better actress, it also makes my point more valid. Moreover it will make the reader realize that Jennifer Lawrence is actually a great actress, this is because it is hard to argue with facts. I then compared Jennifer Lawrence to even more successful actresses like Meryl Streep and Julia Roberts; I chose to compare her to these two actresses because in the world of film they are thought of being at the top. By comparing Jennifer Lawrence to two of the top actresses currently, it makes it seem like she could also be one of the most successful actresses of our time. 

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